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Post by Suicizer on May 17, 2011 2:39:09 GMT -5
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Post by mysterious on May 17, 2011 14:35:55 GMT -5
Muhaha , could take a little bot-match on it and i just found out some little complainments : - the two broken parts (for better flow) are looking constructed, because they are the only one (Maybe you should put some more broken parts in it ?) (-the map is too big for a little duel) -texturing is kind of simple (but really well looking) -the texture on the ceiling doesn´t look good imho (the white stone one) - the boxes don´t flow as much as from the ground than from above -imho some background is missing (that´s my opinion, because i like sourroundings ^^) -the upper green stone texture has some breaks, which break the atmosphere (-there could be more details, but i think it´s your decision) Couldn´t find much more  Now to the positive points : +pretty funny layout for big deathmatch-matches +smooth and warm lighting (could get some more variance, but isn´t as tragic) +sweet teleports +pretty well placed mapmodels +nice jumppads +good balance between open and close gameplay +lovely skybox Well, i really like the map and if you will add some more eye-candy i would like it even more, but your layout and your design are discreet and nice. Would like to play it online at nooblounge.net. maybe you want to upload it ? All in all it´s a 7/10 for now. Like it, greetings Mysterious ;D |
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Post by Suicizer on May 17, 2011 14:45:00 GMT -5
Thanks for the comment!
Ye, I probably will make the white stone on the edge of the jumpcurve darker and get rid of the ugly green stone texture (since it's not fitting that good at all).
The boxes maybe are too precise placed that you really need to jump on the right time. I'll take a look at it again.
I know it's simple texturing, but overall, it has enough contrast in, doesn't it? It's probably because of the way I started making the map and my vision of the map (where gameplay and flow are the center, nothing else at all).
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Post by sauceofallevils on May 18, 2011 8:31:27 GMT -5
Everyone failed but two people! Yaaa! That was disapointing. Well you're the winner suicizer in my eyes! Good job. I just think you need to find a way to make the bots work, otherwise this can never be a release map.
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Post by mysterious on May 18, 2011 10:39:04 GMT -5
@ suicizer : Your map has a real good contrast , but imho 2 or 3 more textures would give more eye-candy , without raising the wtr. Thx suicizer for reading my post carefully  |
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Post by Suicizer on May 18, 2011 15:54:48 GMT -5
Everyone failed but two people! Yaaa! That was disapointing. Well you're the winner suicizer in my eyes! Good job. I just think you need to find a way to make the bots works, otherwise this can never be a release map. You wanna hear something funny? We are both WS members  ! Damn, I was hoping the map of you and Windecker also was finished. Ah well, I hope it still comes... I will add waypoints, but just didn't had enough time to add them completly. If a bot fails on the jumppadcurve, please don't blame me since it's because of sauerbraten, not me. |
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